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Wednesday 15 February 2012

u never left..



Let these tears not fool you,
For this world still is a very beautiful place...
May be it's too dark in here..
But everyday a new miracle makes grace..

Just cause I cry today, doesn't mean
there won't be moments in which I would again smile tomorrow..
So what if that isn't my true happiness,
So what if I have to go on with my masquerade..

If I lose u now,
may be I would lose my spark forever .. 
But the road doesn't end here,
This hope will never fade..I'll be headed some where,
N you'll be on your road to some place else.. 

But I know for sure,
that our paths will yet again cross..
our hearts will yet again smile
Cause you never left,
n neither did i.. <3




19 comments:

  1. I absolutely agree with the hidden meaning in your poetry. Sometimes we have let go of some things which seem very dear to us, but life cannot stop there with that little saga. We move on and move ahead; things might not be the same, but we embrace it all and invite the future to bring some other magic. And no matter how the life would be later the thoughts of those beautiful moments would still cling on to us. This is how life goes on whether we accept or deny it.:)

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  2. Surprising combination of sadness and hope..
    True, life is not fair, but it's still good :)

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    1. thnx Neha.. ur rite.. :)
      yep.. n i don't wanna put across a sad message, but a smile n hope for all :)

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  3. ut I know for sure,
    that our paths will yet again cross..
    our hearts will yet again smile
    Cause you never left,
    n neither did i.. <3

    Love the last para to bits!!

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  4. the longing well expressed..nice work. :)

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    1. thanks alot Puji :) It's sumthin we all mostly land up feeling..

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    2. thnx fr joining my blog Puji..
      I love ur work.. Ur command on ur words is superb.. really admire it..

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    3. The pleasure is all mine..Thankyou for your lovely words.. :)

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  5. This is very beautiful, writing! I love your blog :-)

    I've been trying to locate it to thank you for visiting mine and blessing me with such wonderful feedback! It looks like your Blogger profile is your Google+ profile soo, I didn't see the link to your blog at first glance. Please excuse my delay in landing here. So glad I finally did!

    Looking forward to reading more. The words in your header section are lovely! {|:)

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    1. thank u so much for such kind words.. made me smile :):)
      m really glad u liked my writings, cuz I totally admire yours.. Ur blog is very beautiful fiona :)
      thanx again :)

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  6. Situations prevail us to let go, but deep down, the longing never goes :) And someday, it all comes back! The hope, we never lose :)
    Lovely read :D

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  7. true juhi.. d memories leave their mark behind..
    thnk u so much :) :)

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    1. A collaboration? :) Cool! What do you have in mind? :)

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  8. Hey =) what a touching poem! You expressed all your emotions in this poem. ^.^
    Thanks for sharing your feelings
    Take care

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